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This takes place during the time of when Tirek was destroying ponyville, but before the mane six got kinda defeated. In this story Dumbbell and Dash aren't together, but they are just close friends. But, they secretly like each other. So lets get to the story.
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Ponyville was dark and gloomy. Ponies were hiding in their houses scared to death and wondering what will happen next while Tirek was destroying things left to right. While up in cloud home a stallion with whitish hair and a brown coat with a dumbbell as a cutiemark. He had a worried look on his face and he kept on pacing back and forth. When he finally heard a door open and shut. He looked up and saw a Rainbow blur fly past him. He followed the trail to Dash's room. She was throwing things on the floor. He look confused and walked in.
"Dash?" asked Dumbbell
No answer.
"Dash?!" asked Dumbbell
No answer again.
"Dash answer me!" yelled Dumbbell
"What don't you see I am in a hurry!" yelled Dash
"What do you mean you are in a hurry?" asked Dumbbell
"Me and my friends are going to fight off Tirek." said Dash while walking out the door.
Dumbbell mouth dropped and then he got furious. He ran passed her and stood infant of her. Since he was bigger and taller than her she wouldn't be able to pass him. She looked at him directly in the eyes.
"Get out the way Dumbbell," Dash said "the fate of Equestria depends on us!"
She was able to passed which she was surprised at. When she was about to reach the door knob. His eyes went small and he opened his mouth to speak.
"Dash please don't go!" yelled Dumbbell
"But, I need to." said Dash
"But...but...I don't want you to go," said Dumbbell "I don't want you to get hurt."
Dash's eyes widened and she turned around to look at him and he was blushing like a tomato. She laughed a little and walked towards him.
"I will be fine," said Dash as she got closer to him "don't worry."
She looked at him in the eyes and he looked back. They both leaned in and kissed each other. When they went away they both hugged each other. Dumbbell put his muzzle in her hair.
"Please be okay Dash." said Dumbbell
"I will Dummy." said Dash
He pulled away and looked at her.
"Go and defeat that monster with that "Friendship is Magic" thing you do." said Dumbbell
"Oh I will and it will be awesome." said Dash
Dash got up and walked to door and opened it. She paused and turned her head back.
"Dumbbell?" said Dash
"I love you." said Dash
Dumbbell was shocked, but then he smiled .
"Love you, too." said Dumbbell
Dash smiled and then she walked out the door to meet up with her friends.
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This was going to be a comic, but since I don't have time. I just decided to do this. Hope you all enjoy it. ^^
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Ponyville was dark and gloomy. Ponies were hiding in their houses scared to death and wondering what will happen next while Tirek was destroying things left to right. While up in cloud home a stallion with whitish hair and a brown coat with a dumbbell as a cutiemark. He had a worried look on his face and he kept on pacing back and forth. When he finally heard a door open and shut. He looked up and saw a Rainbow blur fly past him. He followed the trail to Dash's room. She was throwing things on the floor. He look confused and walked in.
"Dash?" asked Dumbbell
No answer.
"Dash?!" asked Dumbbell
No answer again.
"Dash answer me!" yelled Dumbbell
"What don't you see I am in a hurry!" yelled Dash
"What do you mean you are in a hurry?" asked Dumbbell
"Me and my friends are going to fight off Tirek." said Dash while walking out the door.
Dumbbell mouth dropped and then he got furious. He ran passed her and stood infant of her. Since he was bigger and taller than her she wouldn't be able to pass him. She looked at him directly in the eyes.
"Get out the way Dumbbell," Dash said "the fate of Equestria depends on us!"
She was able to passed which she was surprised at. When she was about to reach the door knob. His eyes went small and he opened his mouth to speak.
"Dash please don't go!" yelled Dumbbell
"But, I need to." said Dash
"But...but...I don't want you to go," said Dumbbell "I don't want you to get hurt."
Dash's eyes widened and she turned around to look at him and he was blushing like a tomato. She laughed a little and walked towards him.
"I will be fine," said Dash as she got closer to him "don't worry."
She looked at him in the eyes and he looked back. They both leaned in and kissed each other. When they went away they both hugged each other. Dumbbell put his muzzle in her hair.
"Please be okay Dash." said Dumbbell
"I will Dummy." said Dash
He pulled away and looked at her.
"Go and defeat that monster with that "Friendship is Magic" thing you do." said Dumbbell
"Oh I will and it will be awesome." said Dash
Dash got up and walked to door and opened it. She paused and turned her head back.
"Dumbbell?" said Dash
"I love you." said Dash
Dumbbell was shocked, but then he smiled .
"Love you, too." said Dumbbell
Dash smiled and then she walked out the door to meet up with her friends.
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This was going to be a comic, but since I don't have time. I just decided to do this. Hope you all enjoy it. ^^
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wait really? This was going to be a comic? wha-what about the EqG one?
Okay, about the story. You...are probably going to hate me for this but seriously though BLAME MY ENGLISH TEACHER! She made me become like the grammar police I am.....
whhyyyyy 
As I said before, you don't need to repeat "said Dumbbell" or "said Dash." that is honestly one of my pet peeves with writing. Why is that a pet peeve though? Maybe because I read a lot or something like that.
When you use "said Dash" after what she says, use a comma before the end quotes and the word said. For example, "I love you." said Dash ---You used the basics....well....sorta....after the word "you" you used a period which is correct in some cases but this isn't one of those cases. Instead of a period you should use a comma because...reasons that i have no idea. so instead of the period it should be, "I love you," said Dash. and don't forget the period XD
I hate it when I have to be the grammar police around here but someone's gotta. Critics help improve people with their writing soooo you're welcome i guess????
Okay, about the story. You...are probably going to hate me for this but seriously though BLAME MY ENGLISH TEACHER! She made me become like the grammar police I am.....
whhyyyyy As I said before, you don't need to repeat "said Dumbbell" or "said Dash." that is honestly one of my pet peeves with writing. Why is that a pet peeve though? Maybe because I read a lot or something like that.
When you use "said Dash" after what she says, use a comma before the end quotes and the word said. For example, "I love you." said Dash ---You used the basics....well....sorta....after the word "you" you used a period which is correct in some cases but this isn't one of those cases. Instead of a period you should use a comma because...reasons that i have no idea. so instead of the period it should be, "I love you," said Dash. and don't forget the period XD
I hate it when I have to be the grammar police around here but someone's gotta. Critics help improve people with their writing soooo you're welcome i guess????